but seriously? the intro was a bit too long and rambling. the first 3 paragraphs that is. and the ’scared’ bit seems out of place. because it seems unfounded. what you described later doesn’t give the idea of supporting your fear or some unknown conspiracy, ‘facade’ is going on.

in fact you could have just summed up the intro in two sentences with something simpler.

Ganaesh D: My grandma died too long ago to have any physical remnants left, and the only thing that can be seen outside my window is an illegal scrapyard. *hurhurhur*

But you have a point. I thought I should start the letter in a dramatic way, to make the readers know that it’s a serious matter, something which warrants worry and drastic action. I guess I went for the ol’ melodrama routine. My writing has become rusty, and so has my vocabulary. Guess keeping things short and sweet is a factor that’s as important as having a good idea. Thanks for your input. I’ll keep working on it.